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November 13, 2012
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New ID by Tesuai New ID by Tesuai
i ish done :3
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i thank you for allowing a stranger like me to critique your work, i will be completly honest with my opinion on the image. first off, i really like the way the line quality pops in the entire composition. my only flaw is the arms on your character, they are oddly proportionate. it seems as though you were going for a realistic feel while keeping to it's cartoony origin. you definitely have your own original character which is really good. i feel as though text almost does the image justice but falls short of it's mark because of the imbalance with the x's. if both x's were lower case it would have really set the k and v appart as to imply your username. one more thing on the text, it may just be me, but i do believe that a nice border around the text would have made it stand out from the image. a nice border would isolate both and visually balance the entire composition. the color scheme work well though i feel as though the hard shades around the character were just randomly set. it doesn't seem to sit well with the colors in which they are for. overall this is pretty good and just minor mishaps hold it down, other than that, you did a great job. keep it up X]
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J1Star Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Aw, very cute but not 'slutty', I like it :)
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Tesuai Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks
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pinkpixie31 Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Cute!!
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Snivy116 Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Student Artist
cool job.
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ArtStude3n2 Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Naughty, naughty... LOL
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Tesuai Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD >U<
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marcelinelover123 Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012
cool
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